Evangeline has tried with three guys already (wow that sounds wrong), but none of them have given her the "perfect, life-altering kiss" that she wants. One of them didn't even give her a kiss, just deny her because she tried too hard with perfume, and he was allergic. Evangeline is probably never going to get her kiss unless she actually builds real relationships (64).
I think Evangeline is getting desperate for her "life-altering kiss". She tries kissing a random guy at Starbucks without even getting to know him first. He might not even be good for her, and he might be a lot older. I still think that Evangeline needs to build relations with guys so that they are willing to kiss her, like in the book that the "perfect kiss" was inspired by (48)
That was my fluffy alpaca typing. dfsdf
Evangeline got into trouble for not doing her community service hours. But she got super mad and told her counselor to go to hell. Then she got called over to Ms. Hershey's room. Eva thought she was in trouble because of the kissing thing but shes still "safe" (101)
Wendelin Van Draanen is an eloquent author. I like how she describes Evangeline's thoughts just like a real person would. You can really understand what she means because you can relate to her reactions.
Evangeline is chockablock with humor. Her voice has sarcasm as well. "I'm not doing that again. He's rude and he stinks" (165). Evangeline's voice is just like a real person's voice, making this book enjoyable.
I wrote it wrong haha. I meant that Evangeline now languishes.
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I think Evangeline is starting to feel languish. She is losing hope on finding a perfect kiss, to my opinion. After kissing sooo many people, none of them have given her a good response. Also, she kissed her best friend's boyfriend, and she is deeply regreting that. (177)
I think Evangeline is starting to languish. She is losing hope on finding a perfect kiss. After kissing so many people, none of them have given her a good response. Also, she kissed her best friend's boyfriend, and is deeply regretting that. (177)
Evangeline skipped out of school and decided to apologize to her friends. Especially Adrienne, because she realized that Evangeline kissed her boyfriend. I don't think Adrienne is really gonna accept Eva's apology though (252)
Adrienne is ignoring Evangeline all the time. I think that her hatred is incipient (257)
I think Evangeline is nervous that people won't accept her apology and think its jejune. (261)
Evangeline just witnessed Adrienne's crimson kiss. I think she's jealous but happy at the same time. They became friends again, which really brings the pressure off her shoulders. (290)
Since Evangeline didn't get her perfect kiss, but Adrienne did, she's starting to wonder if it was her that wasn't really erudite. Maybe she shouldn't have desperately looked instead of letting it happen, like Adrienne. (288)
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